I have no idea.
The first line popped into my head, and then I sort of just ran with it. It obviously transformed as I wrote. And believe it or not, I actually took out some 'fuck's. There were more, but even I thought it was crossing a few lines. Eh, well. Anyway.
Open to any thoughts on it. Wondering if it has any impact. If it works. Whether it would be effective if read aloud, despite not really having any rhythm.
I've sort of taken to stream of consciousness poetry that tries to be "spoken word" but I'm afraid it doesn't technically work. Slam poetry? I don't know. Whichever one has looser guidelines and requirements and all that shit.
Anyway.